Showing posts with label Majrooh Sultanpuri poetry. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Majrooh Sultanpuri poetry. Show all posts

Monday, June 10, 2024

Baiyaa Na Dharo Lyrics English Translation from Dastak

 Baiyaa Na Dharo Lyrics English Translation from Dastak

Metal Description:  This is an English translation of Baiyaa Na Dharo, a song from the Hindi film Dastak. It depicts an intimate moment between the protagonists played on screen by Sanjeev Kumar and Rehana Sultan. Check out the Bollywood Translations of other hit songs from Dastak.

This week I am doing something differently. I will start with the English translation of the lyrics up front, so that you are not cluttered with the original lyrics nor with the background of the song. You can judge the English version as a stand-alone poem. Please do comment if you like this change.


English Translation of the Lyrics Baiyaa Na Dharo From Dastak

 

Darling, don’t take me in your arms

But do not quarrel with me as well

Darling, don’t take me in your arms


My chunri will slip off my breast

And my bangles will taunt me in jest 

My passions will surge and swell 

Darling, don’t take me in your arms 

Not in your arms

 

Please let go of my wrist, darling

And please do not insist, darling

The lamp is watching, it will tell 

Darling, don’t take me in your arms 

Not in your arms


 Oh! I am not in my senses 
Clouded by jasmine fragrances
I wander as if in a spell
Darling, don’t take me in your arms
Not in your arms

 

The Original Lyrics of Baiyaa Na Dharo


Baiyaa na dharo o balamaa
Na karo mose raar
Baiyaa na dharo o balamaa


Dhalegi chunariyaa tan se
Hansegi re chudiyaan chhan se
Machegi jhanakaar
Baiyaa na dharo na dharo
Na dharo o balamaa


Mohe chhodo hay sajanaa
Diyaa sees uthaaye sajanaa
Rahaa mohe nihaar
Baiyaa na dharo na dharo
Na dharo o balamaa


Mai to aap bahaki bahaki
Chalun jaise mahaki mahaki
Chameliyaa ki daar
Baiyaa na dharo na dharo
Na dharo o balamaa.

Majrooh Sultanpuri’s lyrics are surprisingly simple, with only one word needing translation. “Raar” means quarrel. “Diya sees uthaaye” is an interesting metaphor. The flame from the wick will raise its head above the rim of the earthen lamp as if to witness their romancing. The scene in the movie shows an electric lamp to maintain realism, but the thought will not be lost to the discerning aficionado.

Enjoy the video of Baiyaa Na Dharo

 The Playing Hard to Get Genre of Bollywood Songs

There was a saying in the Bollywood movies of the previous century – ladki ki na main bhi usaki haan hai or even though the girl actually says no she means yes. Then it was considered unseemly for the heroine to admit wanting to participate in a romantic interlude. So, she would start off by resisting the hero’s advances and by the end of the song would coyly submit to them. This scenario plays out in Baiyaa Na Dharo as well. During the first verse Salma is seen avoiding Hamid’s embrace, but in the last verse she stretches out on the bed beckoning him to join her.


Here are some more Bollywood songs where the heroine pretends to play the tease.

·       Nahin Nahin Abhi Nahin from Jawani Diwani

·       Baagon Mein Bahaar Hai from Aradhana


Check out the Bollywood Translations of some other hit numbers from Dastak


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Thursday, May 30, 2024

Hum Hain Mataa-e-Koocha-o Lyrics from the Bollywood Film Dastak

 

Hum Hain Mataa-e-Koocha-o Lyrics from the Bollywood Film Dastak

Metal Description: Hum hain mataa-e-koocha-o is a ghazal in chaste Urdu written by Majrooh Sultanpuri. Three verses have been used in Rajinder Singh Bedi’s Dastak with music by Madan Mohan and sung by Lata Mangeshkar. Understand the literal translation in English and enjoy the transcreation as poetry.

Before the Translation of Hum Hain Mataa-e-Koocha-o from Urdu

 

Hum hain mataa-e-koocha-o from Dastak is a perfect candidate at Bollywood Translations.

It is one of the more difficult film songs to understand, because it has been penned in chaste Urdu and not in the usual Hindustani which is an amalgam of Urdu and Hindi. And there is a background story here.

 

When Rajinder Singh Bedi decided to make Dastak he approached Majrooh Sultanpuri to write the lyrics. While waiting for Majrooh, Bedi picked up a diary containing the poet’s ghazals and happened to read hum-hain-mataa-e-koocha-o. It was a love at first sight because the very first verse of the ghazal epitomised the central theme of the proposed movie. Majrooh offered to rewrite the ghazal in Hindustani because most Bollywood fans would not understand the original, but Bedi wanted the lyrics as written. He was a filmmaker who did not compromise, not even for his viewers.

 

Bedi ensured that the song was a handcrafted masterpiece. The music was composed by Madan Mohan and rendered in the soulful voice of Lata Mangeshkar. Rehana Sultan played the protagonist to perfection. Dastak performed handsomely at the National Film Awards 1971, winning the Best Actor, Best Actress and Best Music Direction accolades.

 

Hum Hain Mataa-e-Koocha-o As a Ghazal

The metrical structure and the rhyme scheme of a ghazal adheres to tradition, yet its thematic essence varies across its verses. Each stanza of a ghazal is expected to encapsulate a distinct idea, and so it was with Majrooh Sultanpuri's creation. Majrooh has included his name in the last verse as the poet, again as was the practice.

Rajinder Singh Bedi's discerning eye selected three stanzas from the original hum hain mataa-e-koocha-o and skilfully integrated them into the climax scene of Dastak. Those not in the know still believe that the song was custom-crafted for this specific moment. To unravel the profound meaning of hum hain mataa-e-koocha-o, one must delve into the story of Dastak.

Hum Hain Mataa-e-Koocha-o in the Context of Dastak

Hamid and Salma, newlyweds facing the harsh reality of limited housing options, find themselves settling in a flat situated in a red-light district, once occupied by a woman named Shamshad, known to the locals as a prostitute. Salma, unfairly judged and ostracized by the community due to this association, bears the brunt of their prejudice, particularly when Hamid is away at work. Their ordeal reaches a critical juncture when a former patron of Shamshad visits, confessing that his sole pleasure was listening to her sing. In a moment of raw emotion and frustrated by the taunts she has had to bear, Salma retrieves her tanpura and begins to sing hum hain mataa-e-koocha-o.

·       The ghazal’s poignant first verse mirrors Salma's struggle and the societal objectification of women while the patron ogles with lust drooling from his eyes.

·       As the ghazal moves to the second verse, Salma lost in her performance, is oblivious to her husband’s presence, but the viewer sees a jealous rage simmering on Hamid’s face.

·       As the song climaxes in the final verse, Hamid overcome by possessiveness reaches for a knife to stab her. The song ends here but what happens immediately thereafter is relevant.

·       Salma smashes her tanpura against the wall and Hamid drops the knife. Salma apologises for the seeming behavioural lapse and the couple resolve to confront the adversity together.

The Urdu Lyrics and the English Translation

These are the stanzas of hum hain mataa-e-koocha-o that have been included in the movie Dastak, followed by my interpretation. I have not gone for the literal word by word translation but have opted for transcreation of poetry to keep the English lyrics in sync with the events on the screen. See the video of hum hain mataa-e-koocha-o before going ahead.

Hum hain mataa-e-koocha-o-bazaar ki tarah

Uthati hai har nigaah kharidaar ki tarah

I’m like the cheap goods on the street market display

All who look at me wonder what price they’d have to pay

 

Vo to kahin hai aur magar dil ke aas paas

Phirti hai koi shai nigah-e-yaar ki tarah

 

My lover’s elsewhere but it feels as if he’s here

A loving gaze or jealous rage that I can’t say

 

Majrooh likh rahey hain vo ahl-e-wafaa kaa naam

Hum bhi khade huey hain gunahgaar ki tarah

He has always been proud of my fidelity

But I now stand guilty wishing my shame away

 

The Original and Complete Version of Hum Hain Mataa-e-Koocha-o

 

Though this blog is about Bollywood Translations I would like to address the original and complete lyrics of hum hain mataa-e-koocha-o written by Majuru Sultanpuri as a part of his personal poetry writing. See how the interpretation can vary when the movie context is ignored. Read the complete ghazal, understand the key Urdu words and phrases, and then enjoy my transcreation of this sublime poem.

 

Hum hain mataa-e-koocha-o-bazaar ki tarah

Uthati hai har nigaah kharidaar ki tarah

 

Mataa = goods

Koocha = lane

mataa-e-koocha-o-bazaar = goods from the lanes and markets

 

I’m like the cheap goods on the street market display

All who look at me wonder what price they’d have to pay

 

 

Is koo-e-tishnagi mein bahut hai ki ek jaam

Haath aa gayaa hai daulat-e-bedaar ki tarah

 

Koo = lane

Tishnagi = thirst

Bedaar = plentiful

 

One glass of wine would suffice to quench this road thirst

But here I am at the bar with bottles in an array

 

Vo to kahin hai aur magar dil ke aas paas

Phirti hai koi shai nigah-e-yaar ki tarah

 

Shai = thing

 

My lover’s elsewhere but it feels as if he’s here

I can touch his loving gaze be it night or day

 

 

Seedhee hai raah-e-shauq pe yunhi kahin kahin

Khum ho gai hai gesoo-e-dildaar ki tarah

 

Seedhee = straight

Raah e shauq = desired path

Khum = crooked

Gesoo = tresses of hair

 

I thought my desired path would be straight and easy

It twined like my lover’s plait much to my dismay

 

Be-tesha-e-nazar na chalo raah-e-raftagaan

Har naqsh-e-paa buland hai deevaar ki tarah

Be = without

Tesha = wood cutting tool

Raftagaan = past

Naqsh = what has been written

Paa = legs

 

Do not ponder on the past with your bleary eyes

Firmly plant each step ahead build a new today

 

Ab jaa ke kuchh khulaa hunar-e-naakhun-e-junoon

Zakhm-e-jigar huey lab-o-rukhsaar ki tarah

Rukhsaar = cheeks

 

My heart’s wounds now stand exposed like my lips and cheeks

It was a frenzied task to put them on display

 

Majrooh likh rahey hain vo ahl-e-wafaa kaa naam

Hum bhi khade huey hain gunahgaar ki tarah

Ahl e wafaa = loyal person

Majrooh is listing names of those faithful in love

I stand aside guilty wishing my shame away



More on Dastak at Bollywood Translations

 

Dastak was a movie way ahead of its time. If you missed out the first time around you can see it now by clicking the link. Each number in the soundtrack is a song to be cherished. I already have the translation of Mai Ri, and the other numbers will soon be incorporated in Bollywood Translations. Keep tracking this page. Please subscribe to this blog and if you have any requests put them in the comments below.



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